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Avoid The Fog

Chloe's October Writing Challenge

By Brin J.Published 7 months ago 1 min read
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This warning is for all who disbelieve,

what transpires on Hallow's Eve

Do not leave the safety of light

demons and ghouls roam this night

Carry garlic with you, as Vampires wait

for those who make that simple mistake

Avoid the fog, for it'll lure you in

and trap you forever with those who sin

The veil will drop between hell and earth

allowing ghosts to freely traverse

They'll haunt you with the pains of their past

so sage your house until they're gassed

Still don't believe? Give it time,

for that shiver to trickle down your spine

it's the only warning you will get

before the resulting ending you met.

Thank you for reading. This was for the final prompt in Chloe's October challenge :)

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About the Creator

Brin J.

I have a few stories and poems inside me that I want to share. Maybe, if I'm lucky, they'll reach people who'll enjoy them. 📖

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  • Paul Stewart7 months ago

    I really really liked this, Brin.! Of course I did, it was penned by you! lol! Also, I can totally imagine Vincent Price reading this (if he were still alive) akin to his narration over Thriller. Had that kinda vibe! :) Well done!

  • I loved this!! So spooky 👻 Thank you for sharing this with me ❤️

  • Babs Iverson7 months ago

    Scary!!! Loving it!!!❤️❤️💕

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