Everything hinged on one dream,
But it sunk in a sugar-tar land
Draw up a new escape scheme.
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Gates crumbled; the sun snuffed her beam
We bargained with the marching clockhand,
Everything hinged on one dream.
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Rivers wasted to a dusty trench stream,
Prisoners plotted in the midnight sand
Draw up a new escape scheme.
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The warning bell clanged, but they ignored its scream.
They dithered and planned into traps firsthand;
Everything hinged on one dream.
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Where was the warmth of the Gleam?
It shivered and bent to the cold land’s demand
Draw up a new escape scheme.
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Without the light, we’re a blind stumbling team,
braided with darkness that will only expand.
Everything hinged on one dream.
Draw up a new escape scheme.
About the Creator
J. Jay
I like to share my art and writings, whether it's silly or serious. I'll also feature a comic I work on called Writing Whoas, which is about the joys and hardships of being a writer. Stick around to laugh or cry.
Comments (4)
Great imagery best of luck in the challenge.
Great challenge entry and loved the image
This was so optimistic and powerful! Loved your Villanelle!
Excellent villanelle. It’s always good to have a back up plan for sure! ☺️👍