Mom, accept from me a big hi
As you know, I am a little shy
Although I have never expressed it
But I love you more than I could try
I am blessed to have you in my life
You are the brightest star in my sky
I can do anything for your happiness
Your smile is a treasure; your scolding I enjoy
I am all this today because of you
A happy, healthy, lively; and in joy
A chamber of my heart is reserved for you
You could stay here forever with I
You are my pearl, you are my diamond
I adore your personality and I can not lie
Emotions are endless but words are not
So, allow me to say now, a goodbye
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Comments (25)
This is very nice. Well done.
Lovely
This poem gave me an inspiration to write. Amma is an emotion, very well written.
This is truly a beautiful poem with well written lyrical words!
All your stories are beautiful. What is your name and which country do you live in?
Great poem!
hmm, sounds like a heart touching poem.
A beautiful farewell. π₯Ή
An incredible farewell. Mothers with us or no longer will always encourage the spark of a writer. Love you work. Thankyou.
It was touching its really true we love our mothers but can't express it well written β€οΈ
This is good write up keep it up π
This is super and a great way to cherish your mother.
A beautiful poem, and I hope that good-bye in the end is not permanent.
Very well done!
When you are looking at your mother, you are looking at the purest love you will ever know
Well done! Thank you for sharing!β€οΈ
So Beautiful
Aww this is so beautifully touching.
Very sweetly expressed.
What a beautiful but heartbreaking tribute. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem!
A lovely tribute, well done
Such a lovely ode to your mother. I resonated with this!
WOW! Very amazing work!!
Ohh , sweet love tribute to your mom.
Lovely!