me, for this breath
identity challenge
Over the past couple of weeks, I have spent significant time contemplating my mental landscape, trying to pinpoint a single event in my life that marked a shift in identity—a defining moment that triggered a cascade of questions about who and what I am. I've explored the seismic events from childhood to the present, and there have been plenty that brought me to my edges.
Yet, I’ve found it impossible to narrow down a shift in “myself” to just one event initiating a landslide of introspection. There isn't a single defining instance; rather, 42 years of moments. A lifetime full of choosing. A minute-by-minute becoming. Rebirth after rebirth.
With each changing set of life circumstances, there's an opportunity for new pathways of thought, and new shifts in being. Every passing second, I am given the chance to see things from a limited or vast perspective. I am not the same person I was yesterday or even five minutes ago. I'm simply someone who has continued to evolve, for better or worse, through a billion little events that have brought me to the me that I am for this breath.
A billion tears.
A billion laughs.
Massive amounts of failures.
Many wins.
Times of questioning everything.
Moments of absolute trust.
Deep wells of sadness.
Exuberant celebration.
Fighting the current,
trying to swim upstream.
Placing my ears in the water
and floating downriver.
Walking through life
with blinders on,
and ripping them off again.
Falling hard.
Staying down.
Then rising up once more.
Plummeting deep into the
folds of my mind,
examining parts of myself
I wished not to see.
Shedding old ways of
being
and clinging to new.
Sifting through
files of my history—
dwelling on the narratives
I've sewn within.
Unraveling tight threads
of thought
weaving new patterns
into my soul.
Sinking deep into my vast oceans
of contemplation,
filtering out the scum
and refining that
which is worth keeping.
Being pushed
to my edges—
forced to look at
areas where growth
is the only option.
Reaching my limits,
then being dragged past them—
pressed far beyond
my comfort zone.
Standing on the cliffs of infinity
and actively choosing to stay.
*Feeling* triggered
and making the wrong choices.
*Feeling* triggered
and making the right choices.
Wrestling with
generational curses,
severing their chains
around me,
but not without
a bloody fight.
Craving the wisdom
of fellow life travelers—
engaging in conversation
with cab drivers,
grocery clerks,
strangers on the bus,
neighbors,
family,
children—the wisest of them all—
and friends.
Absorbing wisdom of
my great-grandparents,
my grandparents,
my parents,
my siblings—
gleaning understanding
from their experiences.
Immersing myself in the
writings of other minds:
on life,
on death,
on breath,
on joy,
on religion,
on the universe.
Communing with nature.
Sitting with trees.
Climbing mountains.
Gazing at stars.
Dipping into oceans.
Lingering through canyons
in silence—
listening.
Meditation.
Somatic releasing.
Ideology releasing.
Control releasing.
Surrender.
Witnessing life.
Being a portal for new life
to enter this world.
Sitting with death,
watching the slow freeing
of the final breath.
Experiences of profound
realization—
physical clunks
occurring in my brain.
Literal reconstruction.
Feeling the scaffolding fall away,
revealing a new mind.
Yet, without fail,
more scaffolding is built again.
More re-construction.
One thing is certain— I will continue to change.
Growth will come if I allow it, if I can see
each moment for what it is—a
unique opportunity to
evolve into a
different
version
of
"me"
Life is a dance, and when you are dancing you are not intent on getting somewhere… The meaning and purpose of dancing is the dance.
-Alan Watts
About the Creator
Kristen Balyeat
Words fly to me on the wind, bump into me as I'm strolling the city, splash me in the face while I rest by the river, and shake me awake in the middle of the night– I’m humbly one of the many vessels they use to come to life.
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Comments (12)
This perfectly sums up introspection. A journey through moments. Beautiful work Kristen
Gorgeous
This is simply beautiful. I especially love "Standing on the cliffs of infinity and actively choosing to stay." Fantastic job.
Beatitudes from a beautiful soul! Thanks for sharing!
Wrestling with generational curses, severing their chains around me, but not without a bloody fight. This part especially felt so powerful and liberating! Your poem was so SO emotional!
This one makes my heart full! I was so happy there was a surprise poem! I loved it. You put into words things that I’ve sometimes struggled to.. not only that you sound like you have an excellent support network. 😊👍 I feel I’ve gotten to know you more (yet again) through this piece Kristen. Well done on your brilliant reflective poem & thanks for being open and sharing with us! ☺️
Here's to the next (not final) forty-two. Only one thing surprised me in this--that you did not include your children, husband, pets, wild animals & nature itself in those from whom you've learned.
Well, this is absolutely perfect. Well done, my friend!
I wholeheartedly agree and endorse this message 😊 And BOY, are children "the wisest of them all!"
SO much life.
What a beautiful journey and concept of our ever-changing identities
Flaily face. Masterpiece. That is all. My poor ass attempt looks like an ant next to this mountain of a piece that is just pure 100% you. I love that you did it in your own style and that you chose poetry to complete your piece. Wonderful stuff.