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Valentine's Day, Valentine's Day
A short story
For twelve straight nights I have relived that magic moment in my dreams. The moment when Joe, on bended knee, presented me with a ring, and asked me to be his bride. For twelve straight mornings I have awoken to the sight of the beautiful rock on my finger, a new one each time.
For twelve straight days, Joe has looked at me like I’ve lost my mind each time I asked him why my ring is different every morning.
“Are we doing this again, Anna?” He groans. “I never gave you a ring. I’ve told you that a dozen times. You’re just dreaming.”
“What are you talking about?” I scream back at him, as I raise my hand to show him the ring on my finger; just as I did yesterday, and the day before, and the day before that.
“I’m wide awake, I am standing in the kitchen with you, Joe. Obviously, I’m not dreaming.”
“You’re crazy Anna,” Joe replies with a shake of his head and an annoying eye roll before turning away to make himself a coffee.
I can’t help but wonder if he’s gaslighting me, but I can’t think of a reason he would. We didn’t have a fight. We just recently got engaged, committing to spend the rest of our lives together. Why would he be attempting to make me believe I’m crazy? It just doesn’t make sense.
I guess these things never do, but I can't think of any logical explanation for his behavior. It’s not like my family has any money. If it were another woman, why would he have proposed to me? I feel like I don’t know anything about him anymore. It doesn’t make sense. It hurts like hell, and it terrifies me.
As I stand watching Joe make his coffee, I can't help but notice his dark curls hugging the back of his neck, and the beads of sweat glimmering on his bare back in the morning sunlight. I feel the need to be close to him. I need to feel his arms around me and to have him to tell me everything will be okay. I move to him and place my hands on his back in a warm caress.
He turns toward me and smiles. I see his face. It’s covered in blood.
I am jolted upright into a sitting position on the bed. My heart is pounding, I can’t catch my breath. I notice the empty space on our bed, on Joe’s side of our bed, and I start to cry. Just like I did yesterday, and the day before that, and the day before that.
It was all a dream. I know that now.
I lift my left hand, as I watch my tears fall onto the ring I’m still wearing; the ring he gave me on Valentine’s Day. I remember the moment, that incredible moment when Joe, on bended knee, presented me with that ring, and asked me to be his bride.
I remember how excited I was, how happy I was. I remember how happy we both were on the drive to the restaurant that night, and how we were already planning our future together.
Then I remember the truck, and I wonder how much longer I will be forced to keep reliving this horrendous nightmare.
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Cathy holmes
Canadian family girl with a recently discovered love for writing. Other loves include animals and sports.
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Comments (20)
This is so well written but utterly heartbreaking!
Cathy, this is masterfully written, but so heartbreaking. Beautiful but heartbreaking.
heartbreaking wonderful!!
This is heartbreaking!!! I thought she was being gaslit at first and then when I realized he was dead….. wow. Amazing, sad story.
oh my LANTA this was amazing. I was completely enthralled - and the twist at the end! You crafted this beautifully - the experience of reading this was dizzying and then heartbreaking. Incredible. 💗
Lord that was some amazing storytelling! Cathy you flame-broiled this prompt! Stunning work my friend!
Oh, ouch! 😣
The little details you've included inthis story really bring it to life. I love the way you tied it to "Groundhog Day." That was the first thought I had for this challenge. Heartbreaking and beautifully told!
You broked me. Again. Brilliant!
This was one of your best Cathy! You did such a great job with the challenge
Howdy from an old fan; it takes a LOT to get my attention these days even from my faves! Reading your entry and ironic take makes me wonder if Hallmark made for TV films is on your tail:) Good stuff, Cathy!
Oooo. I was wondering where you were going and then...Ooof. What an ending!
Poor Anna 🥺🥺 She needs to see a therapist. Gosh I cannot imagine her living with this recurring nightmare for two years now. Loved your take on this challenge!
Cathy, you took this story to a place I wasn't expecting. Well done!
Great story Cathy. Brutal but great!! 🥰
Oh Jesus. I didn't see that ending coming at all. Goodness that was sad and a brilliant take on the competition.
😲 well done!
Painfully compelling, Cathy. The nightmare version of "Groundhog Day".
So tragic! What a heartfelt and heart-wrenching tale. A very interesting take on the prompt as well.
This is so sad, and we all know that moment of waking.