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Phantom Limb
Reaching out to you.
Written for the R.M. Stockton's Unofficial March "Madness" Prompt. Details below.
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If you had the courage to taste the mind of an unstable individual, you will find that it sits comfortably on the bitter side of flavor…
The masses wake up every day and follow routines that feed their illusion of stability. I never sleep, I’m too busy resurfacing in your lives, wondering why the scabs on your soul haven't dissipated. They serve as a reminder that time does not heal all wounds, it festers some, coaxing you ever so closely to that weakened state where true colors unleash torrential bouts of trauma. I think you unconsciously find happiness in suffering, which is the foundation of my existence.
I'm at your service, pushing thumbtacks deeper than they are designed to go. But I cannot take credit for actions caused by capricious temperaments, I merely suggest them. Your weakness is my calling card and I willfully oblige.
Inevitable consequences bore me. What I care about is driving you mad! Driving you to the point of negative expression. As quickly as I come, I leave you to deal with the aftermath of your own doing until I grab hold of you again, a welcoming reunion of sorts.
Gullible and easy to manipulate. This is how I describe your condition. It's a shame I need you to survive. If I could isolate and harness my power, striking at will, the world would transition to the darkest shade of hate.
Some of you make my job too easy. I like a challenge. I like to pester you, egging you on while waiting for the destructive avalanche to give way, rapidly blanketing everything around you as it runs its course.
It's the ones who avoid me at all costs that I haven't quite transfused my talents upon. Though your method of deterrence is not foolproof, it remains reinforced with something you call self-control. One day, this barricade will crumble, and I'll be waiting to assist you. I'm good at waiting...
If you haven’t yet figured out who I am, the mirror is a fine place to start. I am the mind's phantom limb. I am the hair-trigger to your internal anguish. I am unabated. I steer you into deception, revenge and uncensored reactions. I seek to ruin you. All it takes is one person to spread me to others, causing a lasting domino effect... I am infectious. I am the madness you call anger. Stay far away from me if you can.
Then again... I’m the only one who is willing to help you decide what to do with me.
Encore:
Moonlight Sonata by Beethoven, reimagined. Simmering Madness is demonstrated in this 1:00 clip. Perhaps inspired by the thought of slowly going deaf.
About the Creator
Lamar Wiggins
Creative writer in the Northeast US who loves the paranormal, mystery, true crime, horror, humor, fantasy and poetry. Take a chance, you'll be thoroughly entertained.
"Life is Love Experienced" -LW
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Comments (39)
Well-wrought! Wrath, like all deadly sins, has limited applications, usually at a cost greater than the return. It makes it harder to control the self, easier for unscrupulous selves to control the masses. Irony: where indignation is incentivized according to an affront to dignity, indignity usually results. A hard lesson indeed!
Captivating work, Lamar
That is a gripping tale, Lamar. FAN-FREAKING-TASTIC! This is a warning to all of us! I am sorry it took me so long to read this, but I got buried in work at the office, so I've been burning the midnight oil. I am so pleased to see this got at least some of the recognition it deserves by being selected as a Top Story! So deserving! The psychological terror of this piece is intense, and you really ratcheted it up with brilliant storytelling! Masterful, my friend!
Dripping intensity here, Lamar. "I seek to ruin you." Nice!
Well done with this one, Lamar!
Whoa - intense and very well-written Lamar. Excellent! 😊👏
Congratulations for top story yeah that's right there is a peace also behinds the suffering
The mirror! “I am the mind’s phantom limb.” Incredible. Congrats on TS and the Leaderboard!
Congratulations on the Leaderboard win!!!🥰🥰🥰
This is BRILLIANT, if there was a higher accolade than top story this should get it!
Hey Lamar. Hope you're doing well, friend. I'm alright. Dealing with some health issues :)
Congrats on Top Story!
This is a real mental problem.
This was really well done The imagery is quite vivid https://vocal.media/fiction/the-enchanted-forest-s-echoes
Lamar, this was such a mood. I love the darkness you've inputed here and just your overall narrative voice! Simply breath taking as it speaks to that dark angry part of my soul!! Amazing work my friend and congrats on Top Story!! 🎉
Lamar, you truly outdid yourself. I have read this a few times trying to pinpoint my feelings and interpretation of this beautiful piece. Angst and regret are the two words that keep popping up. Congratulations on a very well deserved Top Story
I felt anger's power in this piece, Lamar. This was really well done.
Congratulations Lamar. This is incredible
Congratulations! Pretty raw. I like it.
Congrats on top story!! 💌💌
Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
L-bud ~ Get some Meat on them Bones ~ A sure Cure-all J-bud
Wow this is good. The voice is so haunting and accurate. Really great stuff Lamar
This personification of anger is so well done! And the opening paragraph was exquisitely done! Great piece, Lamar!
Gripping and powerful Lamar. Congrats on the TS