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Life Happens

An Ekphrastic Challenge Entry

By Judey Kalchik Published 4 months ago Updated 4 months ago 3 min read
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via Mackenzie Davis

It took Jenn two minutes to walk through the front door. She was so absorbed in the dread of entering a home without Michael that she had to force her legs to propel her across the doorway.

It was quiet. No trace of the worry and hurry that accompanied the emergency crew's race through the house yesterday, pushing and pulling a stretcher carrying her husband from their home to the ER.

She set her keys on the small table in the hallway, next to Michael's keys and ever-present Cowboy's cap. She lifted the cap and set it on her head as she turned to close the door before Mitzi could...

"MITZI! Mitzi? C'mere baby; I'm sorry I was gone for..", she choked out, then stopped. How in the world do you tell your husband's dog that he isn't coming home ever again? She must know something is wrong, but why would she hide instead of meeting her at the door?

"Mitzi! Mitzi! Baby, come here." Jenn kept crooning Mitzi's name as she circled through the first floor, looking in all of the usual hiding places: behind Michael's chair, under the kitchen table, by the floor vent in the laundry room, in the bathtub. No Mitzi.

Still calling, she went up the stairs to the loft. There was no place left to hide, but a quick glance didn't reveal the small rescue dog that was Michael's constant companion. He doted on her, well; they both did, but it was Michael that took her to the vet appointment last month when they first got the rotund little dog, and Michael that came back with the news that it was too late for spaying. Mitzi was going to be a mom and they would be doggy-grandparents for, the vet advised, two or three puppies.

He had fretted over the preparation for the puppies, watching YouTube videos, commandeering their mauve bath sheets after deciding they were the softest base of the birthing box he was making. Jenn thought he would be the best at puppy midwifery.

Now. Now it would be Gramma Jenn acting as midwife when the time came. Dropping to her knees with a groan, Jenn lifted the duvet cover and found just dust bunnies. Oh Michael. They were going to clean the house this weekend right after the Cowboy's game. Usually Michael did the low stuff since her knees never did come back from that last fall.

Jenn moved to the closet to get the dust mop, sighing again at the sight of Michael's good gray wool sweater on the floor and keeping the door ajar. His clothes. She would need to take clothes back to town, maybe the wool sweater and the cap? Michael would like that...

Jenn swung the door open and discovered several things all at once:

The puppy birthing box had been dragged into Michael's closet. Mitzi wasn't lost and she was no longer the round pup they had rescued. She'd pulled Michael's sweater off the shelf to make a cozy first home for her puppies.

There were more than three puppies, there were seven. Six soft black-and-brown boys, and one spotted little girl.

Mitzi lifted her head and whined, thumping her tail as Jenn crooned softly. "Oh, baby, he would be so proud of you! And doing this alone! Such a strong, good girl. You'll be alright, honey. Everything's going to be just fine. I'm here. I'm right here."

In the quiet of that empty home, Jenn heard her own words echo within the confine of that closet. They came so easily.

"You'll be alright, honey. Everything's going to be just fine." Of course they came easily, they were top of mind to her since Michael said them to her, clasping her cold hand in his own, as they rode in the back of the ambulance.

This story was written in response to Mackenzie's unofficial challenge, and using the photo that had been assigned to me.

Thank you for the prompt!

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Your comments very welcome!

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About the Creator

Judey Kalchik

It's my time to find and use my voice.

Poetry, short stories, memories, and a lot of things I think and wish I'd known a long time ago.

You can also find me on Medium

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  • Leslie Writes4 months ago

    This is so sad. I hope those pups can bring some small comfort to the grieving family. 🥺 Congrats on your placement in the challenge. 💖

  • Congrats on second place in Mackenzie’s challenge! This such a sweet inspiring story ❤️

  • Hannah Moore4 months ago

    Ach, I didn't expect to cry, I knew what was going to be laid out and I didn't expect to cry....

  • Lamar Wiggins4 months ago

    This brought back so many memories of when I was 14. My mom finally let me have puppy after bugging her for 3 years. We didn't get her spayed until after she had her first litter. I wanted to keep all of them, lol. Loved your heart-warming story!

  • Mackenzie Davis4 months ago

    I wasn't anywhere near crying until the final paragraph! 😭 What did you do to me? This is so well done, Judey, You're incredible. That slow build to the discovery of the puppies is everything here. Reading Jenn's inner monologue, her shock gradually fading, the echoing words. It's perfectly crafted. Now excuse me while I go weep.

  • Paul Stewart4 months ago

    Ah Judey, you did my pic justice with such a heartfelt and sad story. So much emotion and a hopefu horizon. Well done! Loved this!

  • Heartbreaking & warm, all at the same time.

  • Kenny Penn4 months ago

    Aw man, this is such a great, bittersweet story. A little bit of a tear jerker.

  • Aww such a beautiful story; this made my eyes water.

  • Shirley Belk4 months ago

    I need a tissue, please!!! And a hug!

  • What a delightful story with a hopeful ending. “ You'll be alright, honey. Everything's going to be just fine." Of course they came easily, they were top of mind to her since Michael said them to her…”

  • Heather Hubler4 months ago

    Oh my goodness was this beautiful and so touching. What a bittersweet story.

  • sleepy drafts4 months ago

    Oh, my heart. Judey, this is so beautiful.💗

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