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Harrisburg's Cache

A micro-heist

By Leslie WritesPublished 12 months ago Updated 12 months ago 1 min read
Runner-Up in Micro Heist Challenge
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Harrisburg's Cache
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Looting cleared out the non-perishables. Our gang got creative, foraging and hunting with traps, saving our ammo for the zombies. We ate a dog once. I had a rough time with it, but I’ll be damned if it wasn’t the most succulent meat I’ve had since beef. That’s a matter of perspective, since we’ve only managed to trap a few squirrels. They taste how you’d imagine, gamy as hell and their tiny bones difficult to navigate.

This guy who joined us in Harrisburg knows where there’s a hidden cache. He couldn’t offer any details other than the location. Our hunger compels us to follow even the flimsiest lead.

Harrisburg takes us through the snaking corridors of the storage facility. I stay vigilant, tightening my grip on my nine iron as we reach the correct unit. Tensions rise as Harrisburg fumbles with the lock. Starvation is testing our loyalty. He’s liable to get brained by this nine iron.

The door is finally opened, but the only thing inside is money, thousands of useless American greenbacks. We are devastated, but our shock turns to dread with the sound of clumsy limbs bashing against corrugated steel. The zombies approach us from both directions.

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Leslie Writes

Another struggling millennial. Writing is my creative outlet and stress reliever.

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  • Karissa E.L. Cuff11 months ago

    I love the premise and the prose and every line. Congrats on runner-up

  • Lynn Fenske11 months ago

    Wow. Well done!

  • Raymond G. Taylor11 months ago

    Congratulations on your win. Strong narrative and well written

  • Mariann Carroll11 months ago

    Congratulations 🥳🎉💓You are on a roll 🥳

  • Yay 👏 🎉Congratulations, friend🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉💖😉👍📝

  • Lamar Wiggins11 months ago

    Congrats, Leslie. Loved the story.💖

  • Dana Stewart11 months ago

    Whoa, great twist. A cache of greenbacks when you don’t need it. Congratulations Leslie!

  • Babs Iverson11 months ago

    Congratulations!!!

  • Donna Renee11 months ago

    Yesssssss!!! Congrats!!! 😁😁😁😁

  • Naomi Gold11 months ago

    This is so damn clever! I always try to explain to my clients how attracting money works on a metaphysical level. I try to explain that only poor people care about money, and only people who care about money are poor—because money itself is worthless, fulfilling no basic needs, and that would become apparent in a dystopian society. So focusing on something of no value leaves people without real resources. I’m blown away by how you made that point in micro fiction. Congrats on your placement in the challenge. 🥳

  • Paul Stewart11 months ago

    Yay! Congrats on getting a runner-up place, Leslie! So very well deserved! Happy for you!

  • Misty Rae12 months ago

    Love it! Useless money, love that twist. Well done, indeed.

  • Paul Stewart12 months ago

    I loved this and read it before but forgot to come back and comment. Lol, this is great. Love your writing, Leslie!

  • Donna Renee12 months ago

    Loved the ending!! And the statement in there too, what a useless cache! 😬 💵 🧟‍♀️

  • It's so nice to see money meaning nothing. Loved the twist!

  • Heather Hubler12 months ago

    Oh no!! The title caught my eye, because that's the city I live in, lol. This was a clever take with a great twist. I was thinking the twist was because it was useless money and then you twisted harder. Great work!!

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