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But I Said "Yes..."

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By Loryne AndaweyPublished about a year ago 1 min read
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But I Said "Yes..."
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I said "Yes!"

But then she came.

So you said "No."

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Thank you for lingering.

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Loryne Andawey

Health, Happiness & Abundance.

Currently enjoying the company of Francis, Mike, C.H., Gammastack, Michelle, Cosimo, Kristen, Bronson, Bella, Talia, Sean, Babs, Kelli, Rick, Dharrsheena, Heather, Gina and many, many more!

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Outstanding

Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!

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  1. Heartfelt and relatable

    The story invoked strong personal emotions

  2. Easy to read and follow

    Well-structured & engaging content

  3. Excellent storytelling

    Original narrative & well developed characters

  1. Compelling and original writing

    Creative use of language & vocab

  2. Eye opening

    Niche topic & fresh perspectives

  3. On-point and relevant

    Writing reflected the title & theme

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  • JBazabout a year ago

    You didn’t need to say anything more than that. Brilliant

  • Paul Stewartabout a year ago

    Oh sheesh, ouch, as many have said. Ou-fucking-ch! Well written, Loryne!

  • J. S. Wadeabout a year ago

    Ooooo. Ouch! Stinger 🥰

  • Gina C.about a year ago

    Oh man, that hurts ❤️ Amazing work!

  • Ouch!

  • Oof, this was a punch in the gut! You freaking nailed this one!

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    That says a lot. Well done.

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    Fantastic!!! Well expressed!!!💖💖💕

  • Been there so many times

  • Caroline Janeabout a year ago

    There is a lot that can be read in those scant words. 😎

  • Melissa Ingoldsbyabout a year ago

    Truth 😢

  • Donna Reneeabout a year ago

    😩😩😩

  • Heather Hublerabout a year ago

    Ouch :( Painted a picture in a handful of words!

  • Tom Bakerabout a year ago

    Good.

  • Kelli Sheckler-Amsdenabout a year ago

    Ah, man

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