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The Llama & Koala

- Leo & Koda -

By Jay KantorPublished about a month ago 4 min read
Top Story - April 2024
47
Kristen Balyeat & Jay Kantor

Story & Illustrations © ‘For our Kids Someday’

It

has been raining cats and dogs,

the

skys’ been nothing but gray,

our

gigantic suns’ been hiding day after day.

Today

is so different, the storm clouds rolled away,

now

it's time for Leo the Llama to get out

and play!

Kid

Bud, Koda Koala, will be waiting outside.

Leo

is frantically fumbling with laces to get his shoes tied.

One

toe out, he gasped at Mama’s posted 'Fridge List'

Sadly grumbling

knowing he must not resist–

having

no choice but to enlist.

Leo,

{no going out} till your 'Chore' day is done.

He

turned into SadSack, so anxious to have fun.

Mama,

he said with his lip in a pout,

Koda

is waiting to run all about,

pllleeeaaassseee,

can I go, it's just so sun-shiny out.

I

know you’ve got ants in your pants to get out to play,

but

rules are rules, then you can be on your way!

Leo

moped in such a quandary,

yet

conceded and started with laundry;

folding

pants, tank tops, undies, and shirts,

matching

socks, folding jammies, jackets, and skirts.

Koda

knocked, asking what he could do–

chores

are more fun when done by two!

Mama

agreed to let Koda help out,

now

Leo and Koda were goofball twirling about~

running

‘round and

sliding on floors

wearing

fluffy dryer socks while stuffing the drawers.

Mama

got a whirl out

of their childish silliness

~still

a sock slider ~ even a grocery cart rider~

Next

on the list was cleaning up toys;

putting

away cars, trucks, and trains that make noise;

Legos

and blocks, bouncing balls and bats,

stuffed

animal giraffes and smiling Cheshire cats.

Toybox

is bursting

seams…

time

to move on to other things.

Zero

o’ dust, although no muss or fuss

mostly

just whiffing & wheezing!

They

shook out rugs while bagging the trash;

with

two, it was E-z/P-z.

Out

to the garden to pull up weeds,

mow

the grass and rake up leaves…

small

break to admire the flowers and bees. {viaKristenQueenBee}

Back

on kitchen tasks ~

snuck

'unnoticed' snax.

Washed

and dried bowls, pans, forks, and knives.

Carefully

wiped the stove so as not to ignite,

then

polished the counters, shiny and bright.

Up

to the bedroom to tuck sheets and fluff beds,

assuring

pillow fights between those two knuckleheads,

with giggles and feathers filling the air

~ no Goofs here ~ MamaLlama,

the white glove inspector will soon be upstairs.

Bubble

scrub the tub while de-toothpasting the mirror–

Just

make it clean; you know what I mean!

With

each soapy sponge swipe, their reflections got clearer;

dreams

of escaping drawing nearer and nearer.

Mama

was delighted ~ now that you’re done

just

promise me one thing ~ you’ll have tons o’ fun ~

Now

skip on out, and as always,

don't

let the doorknob hit ya

where

the good Lord split ya!

Tossed

hard balls - parched, sipping water from the hose.

Clipped

playing cards to their bicycle spokes

~clickety-clack~

annoying

neighbors with rambunctious boyish sounds

popping

wheelies single file all over town.

Paid

a visit to the candy shop ~

ate

junk food ‘till their buttons popped!

Stopped

by the river to take a Dip,

back

to race bikes as they “Schvitz”...

Drip,

Drip, Drip.

Off

to the merry-go-round for a spin–

faces

sore from their dizzy grins.

Shoveling

deep in sandbox piles,

polishing

treasures through gritty smiles.

Koda

taught Leo how to climb a tree,

found

shapes in the clouds, floating free.

Told

jokes and laughed till their bellies hurt.

Made

royal castles out of sand and dirt.

Hopscotch,

jump rope, and hula hoop,

tic-tac-toe,

and Rubix cube, too.

Knuckling

down marbles and magic tricks;

collecting

shiny rocks and cool wand-like-Schticks,

{j-amigo-ism}

Showing-off

somersaults and risky backflips.

Ears

perk up at the dinner bell,

noses

sniff skyward toward suppers super smells.

Totally

Buddy-Bummed to part ways,

hungry

rumbles bring an end to their play.

High-fives

~ fist bumps ~ secret handshake

wraps

up another Epic PlayDay.

Co-Creators, Ink - By: Kristen Balyeat & Jay Kantor

- Vocal Village Community -

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About the Creator

Jay Kantor

Retired: Write for "The Kids Someday"

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    Original narrative & well developed characters

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    Well-structured & engaging content

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    Niche topic & fresh perspectives

  1. Heartfelt and relatable

    The story invoked strong personal emotions

  2. Masterful proofreading

    Zero grammar & spelling mistakes

  3. Compelling and original writing

    Creative use of language & vocab

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  • Esala Gunathilake4 days ago

    Congratulations on your top story.

  • Such a great engaging and whimsical children's story that many can relate to at any age. I have written a children's story myself I tried to illustrate it myself but don't feel my work is adequate. I intend to make a series of these books to address issues children have to face in this new world. My second book is almost done. I just don't know how to get it published and all that is complicated. Your stories are amazing they are fresh and from a honest and heartfelt place I love that. I remember having to be in the house by the time the street lights came on that was the rule.

  • Such a fun story Jay! Reminds me so much of my time as a kid! Me and my sister were outside riding our bikes every chance we got and only came in when we were hungry, haha. Well deserved Top Story!

  • Grz Colm17 days ago

    Fun work Jay and Kristen! 😁 Well done! Who did the cool drawings throughout?☺️ “ don't let the doorknob hit ya where the good Lord split ya!” - hahah. 😊👏

  • Congratulations on top story 🎉🎉🎉

  • Gina C.26 days ago

    Oh my goodness! How did I miss this?! This is so delightful, fun, and fresh. Wonderful story, Jay! 😊

  • Ameer Bibi27 days ago

    I love the drawings of your stories, congratulations for top story.

  • Jay ~ This is another well-deserved Top Story! It is always a pleasure to take these journeys with you! Fantastic job collaborating. :)

  • Hannah E. Aaronabout a month ago

    Jay! This is such a sweet story! I love how much fun Leo and Koda had cleaning and playing! Also, you and Kristen made such cute art to go along with the story! Great job as always!!!

  • Jay Kantor (Author)about a month ago

    Mart: As your long time biz partner, and Life-Time Friend: Following an illustrious career as a writer of so many Franchise's. Who knew you would morph into an 'illustrator' and writer of Children's stories; Ah, progress. Can you get me a j.o.b. in this new 'Schtick' of yours. You can take the lead this time, "Probably."

  • L.C. Schäferabout a month ago

    So nice, it got TS twice!

  • Heather Hublerabout a month ago

    Loved this from the two of you!! This brought back so many memories of my own childhood. What a wonderful nostalgic trip!! Kudos to both you and Kristen :) Congrats on TS! ~H

  • Paul Stewartabout a month ago

    Back to say congrats that this got Top Story. It seems right as Kristen's got it too :) Well done, sir!

  • ROCK about a month ago

    I love the drawings and the critters! Congratulations on Top Story!

  • Caroline Janeabout a month ago

    You both submitted it! Like that idea! Currently in Greece, completely missed this being published. The same story making a top story twice by 2 authors got to be a 1st! Nicely done, and still smiling at this from the 1st read through. ❤️

  • JBazabout a month ago

    I read this on Kristen Balyeat sight and loved it Congratulations on this

  • Kendall Defoe about a month ago

    Read it, did not have time for a comment, not surprised it got the Top Story crown! Wonderful, wonderful, wonder... full !

  • Jay Kantor (Author)about a month ago

    Kathryn: Congratulations to both Jay and Kristen on their unique and entertaining cooperative work. The story is darling, and the illustrations capture the childlike fun of this rhyming adventure that is so evocative of the play we enjoyed as children. I am not surprised that this gained top entry designation.

  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a month ago

    Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

  • Babs Iversonabout a month ago

    Delightful children's story!!! Loved it!!!💕❤️❤️ Congratulations on Top Story too!!!

  • Gabriela Trofin-Tatárabout a month ago

    Such a beautiful and fun poem and illustration. I could see this as a children's book. Congrats on top story!

  • Anna about a month ago

    Congrats on Top Story!🥳🥳🥳

  • Kelli Sheckler-Amsdenabout a month ago

    I love this so much. What a fun collaboration. Congrats!!!

  • Ameer Bibiabout a month ago

    Your perseverance is both admirable and motivating. Keep forging ahead!

  • Cathy holmesabout a month ago

    Simply wonderful. Congrats, you two. Well done.

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