A camper, blue sky, pork pie hat, and Los Pollos Hermanos chicken.
Superb casting, well written script,
Dynamic connection of Jesse and his teacher.
One bad decision.
One lie that multiplies.
All with intent to take care of his family.
Instead, Walter White sacrifices everything as his ego intensifies.
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C. H. Richard
My passion is and has always been writing. I am particularly drawn to writing fiction that has relatable storylines which hopefully keep readers engaged
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Comments (22)
Great review!
Awesome!!! Love this!!!💕❤️❤️
Loved the show and loved this
Ohhhh! I loved that show. Walter got so caught up. I loved the character of the chicken place owner too, him and Walter. The devil is always in the detail. Great critique.
Nailed it!
Nice review . well done
Good review. Well done.
Brian is great but I never got on the bandwagon on this one. Great mini critique though of a highly acclaimed program! 😃
Love the show, and your unique critique does it justice!
Great critique! Never watched all of it but know the gist of what happens. Love Bryan Cranston. What an actor!
I've never watched this show but always heard good things about it. Excellent review!
Fantastic!!!!
Walter White knows how to make blue. Great series, from the moment he thinks the police are coming to arrest him in the first episode to the dramatic fireworks at the end.
I have never watched the show. But one of my friends is an absolute fan. Well done!
You hit this one out of the park! Excellent, this has got to be a contender! Well done!
That was a LOT you managed to condensed into just a few lines 😁 Everyone says i should watch The Wire but I haven't yet.
Ah breaking bad! Well remembered and an excellent critique! Spot on ❤️✨😁
Great critique
You're goddamn right!
Excellent critique!! You encapsulated the show so well
This series came out of left field and hit a home run. Excellent critique! I agree with everything you said about it!
Good one ❤️😉💯👌