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Have I mentioned an almond themed murder mystery poetry book?? Didn’t make it to the Villanelle 2023 challenge but I have finally finished it… in 2024 😅

By Elisabeth BalmonPublished 3 months ago Updated 3 months ago 1 min read
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Villanalmond 1
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What came first, the plant or the seed

Of this silly so-called nut?

What can this not-quite crunchy thing feed?

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Hunger, for sure, but there is a darker deed;

Another feeling within your gut.

What came first, the plant or the seed?

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A vengeance, a hatred, with which you must plead

Or else be stuck in a rut.

What can this not-quite crunchy thing feed?

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This warning of an evil you must heed,

For every action will make a cut.

What came first, the plant or the seed?

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When your gums start to bleed,

You have no strength left to strut.

What can this not-quite crunchy thing feed?

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The object of bloodlust and greed,

Almonds in your teeth, you wonder what…

What came first, the plant or the seed?

What can this not-quite crunchy thing feed?

Villanellesad poetryFirst Draft
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Elisabeth Balmon

sometimes I write almond themed poetry

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  • Esala Gunathilake4 days ago

    Nicely done it.

  • Oooo, this was so profound and poignant! Loved your Villanelle!

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