Wings arrow sunward
piercing sapphire; bloody light
slowly sieves to stars.
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About the Creator
Sonia Heidi Unruh
I love: my husband and children; all who claim me as family or friend; the first bite of chocolate; the last blue before sunset; solving puzzles; stroking cats; finding myself by writing; losing myself in reading; the Creator who is love.
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I am grateful that I had the opportunity to experience _________. Rupi Kaur's Gratitude Writing Prompts I am grateful that I had the opportunity to experience my children growing up to be kind and loving human beings, that are raising families and work in areas that are making a difference.
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Congrats on Top Story!
Oh yeah. Sonia, this is stunning! 👏👏👏
Congrats on top story!
congratulations on top story.
Congrats for the top story.
An arresting haiku! Congratulations for the richly merited TS distinction!
Very stunning work ❤️❤️❤️
Breathtaking visuals. Love this Haiku! Congratulations on Top Story! 🥳
Well...it took them quite a while to make it, but congrats on Top Story, Sonia!
Lovely nature poem!!!❤️❤️
gorgeous work Sonia!
This is actually quite deep, wonderful perspective of light.
Descriptive and beautiful!!! Love this!!!
Perfect picture - haiku combination!
a wonderful piece, Sonja. Fantastic imagery - truly.
Oh just stunning imagery here, Sonia. Breathtaking. "seives to stars"-- I love imagining that transition, up up up.
Great♥️✌️🧡📝
You packed a lot in so few words. Nicely done, Sonia!
Fantastic Haiku!
This is just gorgeous! The word choice-wow!
Love this! so much drama in so few words!