Twilight Stillness
Richard Manuel
I like the darkness
It is soothing
Calm
Quiet
A few lampposts illuminate the empty street
Outside my window
There is peace
When all has gone to hide away
For the night
I enjoy staying up to witness
The stillness
Between the hustle and bustle
The busy-ness of the day
Deafening silence replaces
The stumbling and bumbling
Of people’s busy lives
An eerie ringing in my ear
Tells me I should be hearing voices and noises still
For now
All is quiet
Before the storm
Once the sun rises
Birds will chirp
Alarms will ring
Roosters will crow
And all together
The feet will shuffle
Into the jobs that slug our economy forward
Keys will jingle
Engines will start
Phones will ring
And the noise will accelerate
Another day into yesterday
Until everyone has had their fill
Of the day’s duties
The TVs turn off
The eyes get heavy
And the sun goes down
Giving the spotted streetlights
Their moment
To illuminate
The still darkness
Of the empty street corners
Peace finds my soul
When these streets
Are feet-less
Sound-less
My senses are at ease
When I witness this tranquility
There is love
In the calmness you bring
My smiling soul
Will remain smiling
In the deafening silence
Of the night
For eternity
Let me bask
In twilight stillness
About the Creator
P.A. Wilkinson
Trying to make sense of the universe around us. The mistakes of yesterday are today’s wisdom.
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insights
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
Comments (9)
Congrats on Top Story! :)
Beautiful
My favourite lines: "And the noise will accelerate another day into yesterday..." "When these streets are feet-less...soundless..." This writing shows a high level of insight to your perspective. I enjoyed that you brought this inside your writing. Congratulations on the top story!
We need to appreciate stillness more and its transformative qualities.
Congratulations on Top Story🎉
Night is lovely! Different sounds, quiet and calming. Loved your poem.
Nothing can be more cathartic than the quiet. Great work!
I love the night's quiet as well.
I also enjoy when the streets are feet-less It can be scary sometimes when no one is around