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The Day Everything Changed

The Last Lunar Event

By Donna Fox (HKB)Published about a month ago 1 min read
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The Day Everything Changed
Photo by Mieke Campbell on Unsplash

Engulfed in darkness

Complete eclipsing of the sun

Lunar event of the year

I wasn’t ready for the chaos that followed

People acted on their animal instincts

Screams and cries for help filled the air

Earth would never be the same

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About the Creator

Donna Fox (HKB)

Thank you for stopping by!! 💚💙💜🩵

If you are interested in longer works by me, I have two books published on Amazon.

Jogger's Trail and Fox in The Hole.

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  • L.C. Schäferabout a month ago

    Ooh like a Purge? 🤯

  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a month ago

    Oooo, the eclipse became an apocalypse hahahhahaha. This sounds like a prologue to a dystopian story. So freaking cool! Like I can see this being made into a movie! Brilliant work D!

  • Kendall Defoe about a month ago

    Good to have you back on it!

  • Grz Colmabout a month ago

    👋 HKB - it’s me, long time no comment. 😬 Maybe a good, new beginning after the chaos..maybe not. Loved your dystopian vibes in your acrostic. 😊👏

  • Mark Gagnonabout a month ago

    And then???? Donna, you left me hanging. Guess I'll never get poetry. I do like your new picture though, meant to tell you earlier.

  • emaabout a month ago

    Really surprising! I love it!

  • Cathy holmesabout a month ago

    Oh wow. This feels like a nightmare. Well done!

  • Paul Stewartabout a month ago

    Oooooooooooh. Very well done, Ms Foxxy HKB! Loved it!

  • Heather Hublerabout a month ago

    Well damn, I'm going back to bed then. Hahaha! This felt so final and brutal and chaotic. Great entry!

  • Alexander McEvoyabout a month ago

    Oh! Lunar eclipse super werewolf mood! Love the darkness of this one, humans turning into beasts (I hope wearing human skin as a disguise) tearing the world apart. Love it!

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