Envious Moon
Destined for darkness
Photo by Marek Okon on Unsplash
Everlasting it seems.
Clouding the world in hollow darkness.
Longing to devour a lantern brighter.
Infinitely envious while
pirating light.
Sequestered to the night with no audience.
Embracing the majesty of the day, even if for a moment.
About the Creator
Mohammed Darasi
I write fiction, poetry and occasional articles about interesting topics. I recently created a website (just because) which I will be posting my writing in (among other things). it would be great if you check it out. https://mindpit.co.uk/
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Comments (20)
beautiful!!!
Love the way this is written. Keep up the good work
I love your poem, "Sequestered to the night with no audience" is a great line!
The bards are turning over in their graves...new bards are making their lights dim. Beautiful. Congrats.
Congratulations on your top story
Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
Many wonderful lines!
Congratulations 🎉🎉 for top story that was very interesting and important information
"Sequestered to the night with no audience." What a stunning line! Congrats on the top story!
I like how this piece explores the contrast between sun and moon, and how darkness temporarily takes the place of light in the day. Personifying makes these objects and concepts more alive, and “Longing to devour a lantern brighter.” is a wonderful piece of imagery Mohammed😊
congrats on the top story
Wow, what a wonderful poem! Congrats on TS.
Beautifully written, Mohammed! Congratulations!
Good work this puts a romantic edge to an eclipse.
This is perfect. Beautifully done.
Well done, this one was truly great to read
Oooo, this was so beautifully written! Loved your Acrostic!
'pirating light' Loved that line! Well done, Mohammed.
beautiful
Love this! The imagery is really well done in this poem. Great work!