Don't wait till the end...
Ask me in December, Babs' unofficial Challenge
Ask me in December,
when the trees lose their green,
the birds fly far away,
and the forests fall asleep.
Ask me, when no one's around
on the snowy street,
where memories are found
and new ones are made.
Ask me if I have faith...
Look! Just stop for a moment,
admire the majestic sunset,
dance and laugh,
be young once again.
don't be afraid
of showing your real self
because that's you
when you smile,
when you cry,
when you say that you're fine
but you're broken inside
and I know that you lie
I don't want you to hide,
just talk to me, alright?
Ask me if we have time,
I'll say "yes, we do,
and we deserve to have"
and you know what?
Ask me now!
Don't wait till the end,
don't look for snow or cold
or any of that,
don't ask others,
ask me, a friend...
Written for Babs' unofficial Ask me in December challenge:
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Comments (29)
Congratulations on your top story. ❤️
Beautiful. Congrats.
Anna, Tip! I am Honoring C. Rommial Butler's request!!!
Congratulations on top story!
Awesome work, Anna! Congrats on your top story!
The most important thing you can provide is safety. It's on that basis that friendships grow. Impressive writing.
Back to say congratulations for top story!! <3
Very good
You've created a real sense of safety with the speaker here.
Congratulations on your top story. I love your story
I loved your poem. Congratulations on TS!💕
Beautiful Anna. Fantastic top story!
Congrats on top story!!💌🥳🎉🥳🎉
Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
Nicely
Congratulations on Top Story! So excited for you, Anna! 🥳 👏🏻
I love this. I'm so blessed that I have two wonderful friends who care more that I ever thought they would. congratulations on TS.
This is wonderful, Anna! Such care for someone dear in a time of pain captured in such Beautiful lines that flowed so effortlessly
Oh wow. Just wow. The ministry of presence- ❤️❤️❤️💙💙💚💚😊😍😁💯
This is both a wonderful poem as well as a reminder of what it means to be a true friend. Great work, Anna!
Well-wrought!
Beautiful piece! It feels like too often we don't realize how much our loved ones might be suffering until it is too late (in this case, until it's already December)
I love this!!! It's sweet how it ends in asking a friend!!! Excellent work Anna!!!
This is beautiful. Well done.
Marvelous!!! Love it!!!💕❤️❤️