You’re a fuckin’ creep
I don’t want you around, hell
You don’t belong here
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I’m so special
I belong here
I’m perfect
I’m beautiful
I’m in control
I float like an angel
I’m so fuckin’ special
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PViM Found Poem Friday
Found poems take existing texts and refashion them, reorder them, and present them as poems. The literary equivalent of a collage, found poetry is often made from newspaper articles, street signs, graffiti, speeches, letters, or even other poems."
-Academy of American of Poets (poets.org)
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Creep/by Radiohead:
When you were here before
Couldn't look you in the eye
You're just like an angel
Your skin makes me cry
You float like a feather
In a beautiful world
I wish I was special
You're so fuckin' special
But I'm a creep
I'm a weirdo
What the hell am I doin' here?
I don't belong here
I don't care if it hurts
I wanna have control
I want a perfect body
I want a perfect soul
I want you to notice
When I'm not around
So fuckin' special
I wish I was special
But I'm a creep
I'm a weirdo
What the hell am I doin' here?
I don't belong here
She's running out the door (run)
She's running out
She run, run, run, run
Run
Whatever makes you happy
Whatever you want
You're so fuckin' special
I wish I was special
But I'm a creep
I'm a weirdo
What the hell am I doin' here?
I don't belong here
I don't belong here
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Comments (9)
Yup - as I’m walking around in shorts getting Googley eyed stares all around the city!! 😖 Creative piece Mother!!
Love this one, and I love what you did with it 😁
My all time favourite song 🎶
Ooo, I was wondering why it looked familiar in the beginning before I saw your note. Good one! Love this song, too.
Love Radiohead, and may try this prompt but have two stories waiting already 😂
I loved this prompt! Now I m going to listen to some cool old songs for inspiration :D
Ah Radiohead!! Cool. 👍 I’ve never heard of this form!! And yes you are fuckin special! 😁😂
Okay so this was a PViM prompt hahahaha. First Kelli was writing pieces on this and I was wondering what challenge did I miss hahahaha. Loved your take on it!
It's like you combined the last prompt with this one. Stunning! I absolutely love this take on it!