A world of Happiness and smile
My first ever Haiku
By Esala GunathilakePublished about a month ago • 1 min read
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A blind was searching for his way,
I got his hand and crossed him the road and he may,
"you are blessed son" I can't say how happy I was.
About the Creator
Esala Gunathilake
I am an enthusiastic writer who feel the sense of humanity. Thus, I can write stanzas, short stories, novels, articles and blogs as well. I am a blog contributor for the Ananda College Engineer's Ink student chapter website.
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Comments (12)
We need more of these. Helping people today seems to be lost in modern society i love helping people it's a passion there is a profound feeling when you lend a hand especially with strangers. Great read!
lovely haiku!
We all get pleasure from helping, don't we.
Great message!😊💕❤️ A master poet friend of mine told me to learn the haiku form first and then she said that I could change it😉
Not really a Haiku, but beautiful sentiments. I see your other Haiku got much better. We all learn from each other. Always be your kind self.
Blessing to those that help out others
I really know how happy you are helping others Esala. I must say, everyone doesn't bear such hearts. So you are a blessed person. Even though we are physically distant by now I can feel the scent of humanity you always spread, with these poems. Best of luck for everything my dear friend..
I have been waiting for your new post and here it is. I must say these few lines have a deep message and feelings and emotions attached to it. It is really evocative.
You are a blessed person.
This was wonderful! However, this is not the format for a Haiku. The first line needs to have 5 syllables, the second line 7 syllables and third line 5 syllables.
Your poem beautifully captures the theme of happiness in small things.
Yay, I've been waiting for you to publish a new story, you came with something simple and relatable😂😂😂. I loved it.